Friday, March 13, 2009

Fiction Friday: The Heroos Save the Wold

The Heroos Save the Wold

by Big Brother
grade: Kindergarten

The vilins are atakin the wold.

The good guys see the vilins.

The Heroos are atakin the vilins.

The car casth into the car BOOM.

The Heroos SAVE theday.

The End.

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Elizabeth Kathryn Gerold-Miller said...

I always love a good classic story wherein the good guys beat the bad guys!

Loren Christie said...

Don't we all, right? If only it were that simple... Maybe he'll grow up to be the Director of Homeland Security.

jenX67 said...

That is so hilarious - that part at the end! It sounds so like a 6 y.o.

Anonymous said...

If not DHS Director, maybe director of big-budget summer action films. He seems to grasp all the needed elements - good guys, bad guys and big explosions!


Loren Christie said...

Hi Jen, Hi G. I wish I could show you the pictures that went with this story. I laughed so hard.

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