Friday, June 05, 2009
Writing Exercise on "Time"
The prompt is:
Write a story about Time.
(So here is my try. I think maybe I could use this little draft somehow.)
Gina's life is a collection of unorganized photos in a shoe box, each picture an isolated moment protected from Time. One day she decides to open the lid and dig through her life.
As a child, Gina has a favorite stuffed toy named Fishy. Fishy is supposed to be a dolphin, but because he is hand sewn his species is difficult to pin point. At her grandmother's house Gina shares her breakfast with her toy, smearing and entire bowl's worth of oatmeal all over Fishy's face while her grandma is on the phone.
Moments upon moments stack higher.
The line for the pay phone at Rider Street Middle school sometimes reaches several feet in length after school. You needed 25 cents to dial out. Kids ask for change and sometimes Gina gives away her last nickel, especially if the request is made by a handsome boy.
Forgotten moments surface.
Her 18th birthday rewards Gina with freedoms. It costs $6.50 to get into Sun Highway Beach. She rides with one of her friends, a new driver. They stop at 7-Eleven for red Slurpees and eight D batteries for the radio, then zoom across the bridge with the car windows rolled down all the way.
Moments that shed a tear rest on the bottom of the pile.
There is a skylight in the limo that carries Gina and her new husband from the church to the reception. She slides back the glass plate and squeezes out halfway through the roof so the photographer can snap a carefree picture of her in her wedding gown.
Some moments are stained with apple juice at the corners.
Gina and her friend Jen set their newborns under a tree on a cotton blanket for pictures. The babies wobble and gurgle, finally balancing on each other, heads turning toward the familiar, beloved voices of their mothers.
Moments upon moments blink by.
Gina looks down at the hands of her teenage grand-daughter holding the shoe box lid. They are smooth and creamy, so young. Gina has grown like a Wisteria plant, her skin grooved with age, her life reaching through fences, climbing over rooftops and clinging to walls. Gina is old and finally ripened. Time transforms tiny plants into magnificent trees. She hands the box over to the child, ready to let her organize the moments.
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